Writing task 1

writing task1

writing task2

cohesive devices list

对于11-test1的task 1的答案示例,4.5分。

考官评价:

  1. 数据描述不准确,不符实。
  2. not arranged coherently, the description jumps. Not follow a logical sequence. 描述方式跳跃,不连贯,缺乏逻辑性。
  3. 词汇量够用,但是词汇依赖于题目材料,并且有不少拼写错误。
  4. 叙述结构有限,语法错误很多。

分析,上面考官的评价完全是从评分四项来的,task achievement, coherent, lexic, grammar. 增加了对评分四项的认知。

训练方向,

  1. 数据描述准确度
  2. 逻辑性,耦合性。多读,同时读外文资料的时候,注意总结。
  3. 词汇量,积累。
  4. 语法,积累学习。

如何writing coherently:

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